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I want this to be real, I want to forget you.

I want to you to talk me, I want you to ignore me.

You are so beautiful, you are so ugly.

So smart, so dumb.

Stop being yours, start being mine.




Exams, friends, end of the schoolyear, beach, prom. EVERYTHING is mixed up lately. I'm getting crazy! I don't have almost time to do anything, but I can assure you I'm having a good time!

And about the picture... Well, I don't know why I wanted to submit this really, is not as if I think is a good photo or anything, I just feel as if it just matched with my contradictory feelings right now (The blue picture and the red picture, the opposites in a way) about a boy that I like, who's hurting me with his ignorance about my love for him. Anyways! That's it. I still have to answer to some feedback, and I'm sorry, but I still have no time, I wish I did but when I come back home I'm so tired that my head starts to ache. D:
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Awww, I really, really love this!
It's awesome that you paired the two together too!

For the first one:
I like that the light has a kind of fire-y touch to it. It's bright in your hand, kind of making your palm glow yellow as if you had some kind of superpower xD and it's tangled as well, like emotions and thoughts that are too confusing to figure out one by one. I also like how you almost seem to be looking away from it entirely, like with your eyes completely closed. It has a kind of resignation to it, of being tired of trying to figure it all out. I also really like how your hair is placed around you and how the lighting glows orange up around you yet doesn't quite fill the room behind you either. It's almost like an internal passion that no one else can always see, every day.

The second one:
It's a completely different look to the first one, and rightly so. I love how you have your hand holding the lights up near your face, with your fingers lightly on your temple, almost as if you want to hear the lights, their words of guidance, their helpfulness. I also like how the lights there aren't as clumped together but more so curling around at different spots. The blue-green light is wonderful too, both calming and hard to place. From what I can tell, it doesn't appear like you have your eyes as closed in this portion of the photo than in the top one. It gives you a more concentrated look, a desire to hear them, really, really hear them, etc. I also really enjoy how there's such darkness in this one too. It hardly lights up your face but I think that adds more emotion and depth to the shot. I get more of a sense of loneliness from it, of not knowing where to go or what to do...

I think pairing them both up was a great idea, they both share their own story that if done separately, I think, would have led to an incomplete feeling. For me, as well, I don't see any faults with these two photos, but if there is any, I think that adds more to the idea than it could ever take away from it.

All in all, I think you did a really great job with this! The emotional and thought aspect runs so deep and it's lovely to see such concepts around these days =]